The Kiss
You stood there, waiting. Finally I saw you. Wow. Is that really who you are? I could not believe it. The silhouette of your body in front of the city lights was just so breath-taking and surreal, I thought I was dreaming. Maybe I was. You waved. How could you? It wouldn't be necessary. I spotted you among them, I knew that nobody else would wear that amazing dress you put on just for me. Your long hair was swept by the warm breeze of that temperate night and it made the image of you unforgettably perfect. I lost sight of everything around myself, all the noisy people around me, the cab drivers driving at my pace, shouting something that just didn't make sense to me in that split second I was drawn to you.
And there it was: The moment.
I stopped two meters in front of you, the marvellous silhouette of an angel turned into a gorgeous woman with radiant eyes and a smile that was only meant for me. A smile so honest and pure, it made me feel that everything was right in that moment. I needed to look into your glowing eyes, before we touched. Your embrace felt safe, comfortable. Your lovely head on my chest and your arms wrapped around me felt like the world can stop any minute. My world did. Basking in each other's presence, our eyes met again and I knew it was the right moment to kiss you. My hand went from caressing your hair to gently touching your chin, lifting it slowly. The moment froze. We looked each other in the eyes again, deeply: Goose bumps. I leant toward you, our noses touched tenderly, our lips were almost there. I tilted my head and pulled you closer to me. Our lips brushed, then touched: Explosion. Adrenaline. My heart pounding so hard, I could feel it in my fingertips. It was a soft kiss, yet a long one. It felt like we want to make it last forever. As soon as we became more and more comfortable with each other, we closed our eyes and while the soft kissing sounds were inaudible to passers-by, we felt like we're invisible, too. We were hungry for more. Your lips were so tender, so inviting, I just could not imagine ever letting go or stop coming back. We became silly and our kiss turned into kisses which turned into smiles and relaxing laughs. That was when you said:"You're not a bad kisser". And you smiled almost cheekily. "You're not bad yourself either", I replied and winked. Then I took your sweet little hand, intertwined my fingers with yours and we walked off into the city lights.
It was the next morning when I realized that all our clothes, that were shattered around the room, and especially your panties, that were hanging on the door knob, looked suspiciously like we didn't...
And there it was: The moment.
I stopped two meters in front of you, the marvellous silhouette of an angel turned into a gorgeous woman with radiant eyes and a smile that was only meant for me. A smile so honest and pure, it made me feel that everything was right in that moment. I needed to look into your glowing eyes, before we touched. Your embrace felt safe, comfortable. Your lovely head on my chest and your arms wrapped around me felt like the world can stop any minute. My world did. Basking in each other's presence, our eyes met again and I knew it was the right moment to kiss you. My hand went from caressing your hair to gently touching your chin, lifting it slowly. The moment froze. We looked each other in the eyes again, deeply: Goose bumps. I leant toward you, our noses touched tenderly, our lips were almost there. I tilted my head and pulled you closer to me. Our lips brushed, then touched: Explosion. Adrenaline. My heart pounding so hard, I could feel it in my fingertips. It was a soft kiss, yet a long one. It felt like we want to make it last forever. As soon as we became more and more comfortable with each other, we closed our eyes and while the soft kissing sounds were inaudible to passers-by, we felt like we're invisible, too. We were hungry for more. Your lips were so tender, so inviting, I just could not imagine ever letting go or stop coming back. We became silly and our kiss turned into kisses which turned into smiles and relaxing laughs. That was when you said:"You're not a bad kisser". And you smiled almost cheekily. "You're not bad yourself either", I replied and winked. Then I took your sweet little hand, intertwined my fingers with yours and we walked off into the city lights.
It was the next morning when I realized that all our clothes, that were shattered around the room, and especially your panties, that were hanging on the door knob, looked suspiciously like we didn't...



26 KAFKAESQUE COMMENTS:
lol it's you! i thought you were someone else. i didn't realize that now you're blogging under different name :( my bad!
p.s wow. the story above is breathtakingly amazing. :)
August 23, 2009 6:50 AM
@girl in stiletto, it's ok, I found you, you found me :)
Thanks a lot for your compliment. Very sweet of you. *Winkz
August 23, 2009 6:54 AM
Cool one huh? I think a lot of people would blog about this at some point of time in their lives. I know I did.
(http://yourcookiejar.blogspot.com/2008/08/tfk.html)
August 23, 2009 2:15 PM
@Nash, I guess some topics are universally interesting to all of us. Mine is fiction, though. Like a short story.
August 23, 2009 4:52 PM
you've captured a very special moment so wonderfully, i enjoyed reading it!
August 23, 2009 7:03 PM
@adamantixx, Thank you very much, sir. I wish I was such a master of English language like you, maybe your blog will help me in that effort. Then I can express myself even better and write better stories.
August 23, 2009 7:45 PM
The scene of this article is so beautiful...
You're truly a romantic guy!
That's why you're always thoughtful to women,
because you know us indeed.
August 23, 2009 9:59 PM
@Lily, you know.. I may not be romantic always and all the time, but I can be sometimes. I think my ex would say I wasn't romantic enough, hehe. But it's always 2 ways. A woman must bring out the romatic side of me :)
August 23, 2009 10:02 PM
you know, i was almost read a poem!! :) what a romantic guy... i'm proud of you, Hyong :D
August 23, 2009 11:47 PM
different name huh. what did you use to be?
i like this. good writing and very emo! ;)
August 23, 2009 11:49 PM
@Hwan, thank you, dongsaeng.
@floreta, ah, I guess I was not well known, just used my own name, now I use a nickname... I'll request to follow you on Twitter and you'll know :)
August 23, 2009 11:54 PM
hehehe...I like the last paragraph!! Let's us imagine what had happened between him and her. Hehehehe..So naughty!!! Panties hanging on the door knob? hehehehe..who did it? Or you just throw away in the right place? hehehehe :P
August 24, 2009 11:07 PM
@Kanchana, thanks! ;) You're the first one that saw the joke in it, hehe. Smart girl :)
August 24, 2009 11:09 PM
It's just very lovely. I melt when I read it! :D
August 25, 2009 12:07 AM
@Selvy, awww, thanks, it is my pleasure to make you melt :)
August 25, 2009 12:15 AM
well done!!x1000
keep going!!
August 25, 2009 1:06 AM
This can only be my dear Cherry :P Thanks, my friend. I'll keep going, hehe.
August 25, 2009 1:11 AM
I'm not one for fiction. Where's the photon blasters? The explosions? The alien attack on planet Earth??
August 25, 2009 6:58 AM
@izso, not on this blog, buddy, haha...
August 25, 2009 7:00 AM
A kiss is the contraction of the mouth due to the enlargement of the heart...I love your description of the kiss. Made me realize how much I need one right now.
August 25, 2009 9:16 AM
@Demigoddess, I guess I was missing to be kissed, that's why I wrote this. Thanks for the nice comment.
August 25, 2009 3:15 PM
I loved it...
November 3, 2009 6:59 PM
@Harini Thank you :) I appreciate it.
November 3, 2009 7:11 PM
Wow. How did I miss this one?
It's 35 degrees here and I'm sweating. Phew! Hot!
December 30, 2009 9:46 PM
@Tricia: Ah, thank you for liking this old post, hehe. I used to write more stuff like that, but if you read, bear with my bad English.. :)
December 30, 2009 9:55 PM
Didn't notice bad english. Just enjoying your lusty side ;) Hopefully more of this in the New Year.
December 30, 2009 11:13 PM
Post a Kafkaesque comment!